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PostSubject: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:28 pm

Just A Dream

How do u want me 2 feel?
With all this lies and hurtful times
My wounds will never heal!
I can't believe u've just said that?
Would u leav me alone I can't take this anymore

I've stayed up when u where hurt
I pretended like nothing's wrong
But guess what? I'm living tonight
Coz it's so damn hard
Watching you disappear
And I'm standing here empty handed
Come close come with me

Forget this year and what it means
I loved the way you looked at her
Can I have it for me ?
For just this once


But after all it's just a dream
A dream that could never
Never, ever.
Come true

You used to tell me everything that's happened with you and her
And I watched you suffer and getting hurt
If you were mine I wouldn't do anything to hurt you


But after all it's just a dream
A dream that could never
Never, ever.
Come true


If you faced something hard something you can't tell anyone about
You think about me before her
But why can't you love me

Why am I just a secret keeper?
Why can't you love me
It's a hard question I know
But I know you better than her
I love you more than she love's you
I've kept your tears
I've kept your whole life
Inside of my heart


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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Dec 10, 2008 4:06 pm

huh?!!! nooo waaaay u wrote that .. gurl its so amaaaaaaaazing ..


i feel am reading a love story in this part ..


But after all it's just a dream
A dream that could never
Never, ever.
Come true
You used to tell me everything that's happened with you and her
And I watched you suffer and getting hurt
If you were mine I wouldn't do anything to hurt you
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 11, 2008 2:26 am

yay!! some1 liked it
thnx A jay Razz
i wrote it i swear Sad
cryyy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 11, 2008 12:48 pm

i want it Very Happy .. its mine now right??? Very Happy

otherwise Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:02 pm

NOWAY!!
it's mine Sad

i'm gonna have a band someday this will b our 1st single 8->


Razz if u took it i'll kill u Very Happy how about that Very Happy?
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:26 pm

Sucks but A Good Start For A 16 Years Old ....
We Dont Have A Shitty Fuckin Love ...So Just Write As Something METAL Messiah Sake!
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:41 pm

hey!!!!! Sad
thnx 4 tellin me that Razz n well i think there's a complment somewhere Very Happy thnx again
i'll try 2 write some hate stuff Very Happy
for al8e38a3's sake
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:49 am

mmmmm
welll
i guess this can be a Smile great song
but
not for metal
for emo .. or hardcore
and ...
as i m an Emo .. i really liked it

good job gheedooo
really coool
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:18 pm

IraqiNemesiS wrote:
mmmmm
welll
i guess this can be a Smile great song
but
not for metal
for emo .. or hardcore
and ...
as i m an Emo .. i really liked it

good job gheedooo
really coool

are u an EMO?!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 7:12 am

Wink i m everything .. except metal head
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 7:24 am

hahahahaha .... then how u r in a metal band and u r not a metalhead?!!
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 7:27 am

tell the members ... looooooool may be they don't have but me as a lead guitarist for death metal shit .

hahahaha

but all of u be sure .. i m not a metal head .. and i play everything i like to play
that's it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Dec 24, 2008 7:08 am

YaaaY!!!
finally
som support
thnx
man thank u


Be wat u want 2 be man don't care 4 wat they say Very Happy

plus it's just words n it's somethin i felt it n i wrot it n it turnd out 2 b ok
Very Happy

thnx u guys n thnx ameen
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Dec 24, 2008 7:28 am

bro .... do you wanna work with me??
as my song writter ? Very Happy
i am a member in a band and we have our album here in the forum ... check it and tell me what you think scared

http://iraqimetalfreaks.yoo7.com/the-soundtrack-of-our-lives-f1/all-hell-knarkbrand-our-latest-album-t105.htm
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:57 pm

u welcome gheedooo
well sorry to say that but
that's y i hate iraq
in iraq u must be what all others want u to be
but anywhere else .. u can be what u really want to be
and congrats again gheedooo


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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Mon Dec 29, 2008 11:11 am

gr8 one
its like a story just like wut these guys said,,,it could be a nice emo song :Dlol
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Tue Dec 30, 2008 12:19 pm

hey ameen i agree with ya
but u can actully b wat u want SOMETIMS

we all hate this hell we live in man





dave r u talkin 2 me Very Happy?

i've just lsnd 2 some of the song
n it's prtty gd
keep it foog Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Fri Jan 02, 2009 11:39 am

but u can actully b wat u want SOMETIMS

mmmmmmmmmmmm
lol

i think ... never .. in iraq ?? never
lol
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Sat Jan 10, 2009 1:18 am

EMO gurl!!!!
thnx alot



yeah ameen but somehow u have 2 express urself .. ... ..
well anyways Someday....someday we'll get outta here n actully be wat we want 2 be
Very Happy
i'm a dreamer
lol
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Sun Jan 11, 2009 7:10 am

loooool
i c then
that makes sense .. haha
yeah ... see u in america then Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:17 am

yeah sure but i'll live in canada
i'll pass by n have a concert with u guys Very Happy

yalla let's dream wat the hell Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:28 pm

nice lyrics
keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Wed Jan 14, 2009 12:18 pm

lol gheeed .... ok then
prepare a shirt to sign on it
looooooooooooooooooooool
7loo wa7id yeseer khalaf Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:05 am

khalaf ! !
Very Happy

yeah man i'm gonna perepare a shirt
u know wat Very Happy u should do the same coz i'm gonna have a band of my own Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Dream (my 5th lyircs)   Thu Jan 15, 2009 1:06 pm

hey ya .... cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
so u r gonna be gheedo gosso دجيب حظن
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