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dave



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PostSubject: Drops of my Blood- a poem   Wed Dec 10, 2008 5:26 pm


Lock me in your strong arms
Paint with your lips all over me
Then tie me up next to you
Let the day pass like that

Sink your fingers in my hair
Scratch me, kiss me, bite me
let them write painful verses about us
I`m a woman-boy and you`re a man

Drops of my blood on your lips
In your eyes-wild rapture
And the demons roaming free
Emanation of your manhood

I don`t want you tender-I want pain,
To scream and wince, and cry in ecstasy
your name. For how long
do I have to wait for you?

Do not let me go. Lock the door
Hide the key, forget where it is.
Make me really happy.
You are the one I want to worship

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PostSubject: Re: Drops of my Blood- a poem   Thu Dec 11, 2008 9:29 pm

I don`t want you tender-I want pain,
To scream and wince, and cry in ecstasy


This passage it's really amazing i like it so much
than x bro
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PostSubject: Re: Drops of my Blood- a poem   Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:53 am

Drops of my blood on your lips
In your eyes-wild rapture
And the demons roaming free
Emanation of your manhood



i liked this
cool man
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dave



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PostSubject: Re: Drops of my Blood- a poem   Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:07 pm

thanx for your comments nymphetamine girl [b][b]IraqiNemesiS [/b][/b]
.. its really amazing that two metalheads like my poem
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