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WhiTe LilY
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PostSubject: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:14 am

Claws of Love

In a month or two
I felt something new
felt the sky is blue
and my heart is brand new

something strange happened
not that I have expected
a glow which my way lightened
opened my eyes and broke through my heart

forgetting that old bitterness
I used to hold inside
my grieve and loneliness
believing they were mere lies

and those little dark corners
where I sat, face down shoulders
people may wonder from this oddness
because they have not known such sadness
such creepy hollow emptiness

In those tight corners, I used to sway
I close my eyes and try to pray
with the very first tear knocks the ground
Angels can hear its sound
and dead souls come around

They come to accompany
to bring me some harmony
after losing sensibility
they show me where lies credibility

But in a month or two
I felt something new
felt the sky is truly blue
and my heart is brand new

Felt my heart is beatin’
for a stranger breathin’
while mine are taken
heart beats are speedin’

His eyes like blooms in May
when look at me, mine can’t sway
Who would take them away,
those two blooms of May?
a question I ask as I pray
God, Make me theirs anyway..

Old sad memories now sound cheerful
Miracles now seem to be hopeful
And with what life can be such joyful,
Rivers of feelings; way too beautiful!!

I like to watch as he works
while his patients he holds
his compassion that shows
of much dedication he owns
when a man's teeth he crowns
his fond in his eyes glows
like a child, found a purple rose..


But animals are not the only species with claws
tuned out the most beautiful sentiment can cause
even the more complicated bleeds and wounds
of those were ever done by bears, eagles or wolves.


Claws of love
Written on 14.11.08 at 2:33 pm.
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:09 pm

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa did u write that gurl????????? damn u r sooooo gooooooooooood


i love that part...

Old sad memories now sound cheerful
Miracles now seem to be hopeful
And with what life can be such joyful,
Rivers of feelings; way too beautiful!!



wut do u have else huh huh huh?? :p
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WhiTe LilY
معارف ديربالك be aware.... special person
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Mon Nov 24, 2008 11:55 pm

yea.. that part IS special .. i think this is from which u knew it's definitly me who wrote it
thnx jay ..

i used to write and throw my writings away .. but from now on i'm gonna put them all in here
especially for you jay Wink
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WhiTe LilY
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:10 am

For you lil bro.

A rare flower that's around
ppl say it can't be found
a friend with no bound
is like a free walking cloud
behind which the sun feels abound
it's my friend A-Jay, that's my cloud
my dear brother who's always around
when i'm all alone shouting out loud
he's the one can hear my inner sound


Best of luck Jay
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Fri Nov 28, 2008 4:57 pm

well done ... perfect
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WhiTe LilY
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Sat Nov 29, 2008 12:16 am

thank u nemesis .. : )
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Sat Nov 29, 2008 4:09 am

aaaaaaa am speachless now sis Embarassed

thanx so so so so so so much,,, i wish i can do just a small thing for u like wut u did 2 me.. u r always next to me when i need u Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ~ CLAWS OF LOVE ~   Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:36 pm

In those tight corners, I used to sway
I close my eyes and try to pray

with the very first tear knocks the ground
Angels can hear its sound
and dead souls come around


that part's rly amazin
OMG!! ur feelings r gr8

loved it it's
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