hey guys this is one of my best poems i've ever write .. tell me what you think about it
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I’ve walked alone
For a million years
Under the dim but graceful moonlight
Endlessly searching
For someone to hold
Who cares for my views and insights
When all was lost
And I was grasping
At the thin air that filled my sorrow
I saw your eyes
Light up the sky
Giving me a bright tomorrow
There are no words
That can express
The emotion I feel in my mind
And though I am wary
I know very clearly
That it was love all this time
Now I walk
Over the same ground
But this time with a new smile
My life feels complete
I feel I’ve found my feet
And I hope to keep them for a while
But as I begin
To enjoy the love
That I have come to treasure
It slowly departs
Leaving me at the start
Of what seems like the beginning of forever
I have no words
I have no sight
And I’m left again under the moon
But I hold out hope
And pray to the sky
That I will see your smile soon
Subject: one of my best poems i've ever write 
Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:40 pm
