written by me....

Subject: written by me.... Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:22 am

ok ppl i made this ,tell me wut u think ? if it sucks tell me ..

its called''my world''
....
Everytime..I try to get better
I become worse than ever..
I've never..never wanted to be like this
I've never..never wanted my life to be such a mess!
I live in my own world
Where depression is my only friend
I know i'll end up lying (dead!)
I'm gonna die alone
Laying on the ground alone
I've always been alone
walked the roads alone
went to bed alone
I'll always be alone
Forever alone..
But who's listening? who's gonna when my whole world is falling apart
people talking and laughing and not noticing how they're ripping out my heart
cant you see how am i disappearing? someday ill be dead and u will see what you were fearing
and i know you're not fucking hearing , i hope you'll like it when you see me bleeding

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:45 am

no way dont tell me its bad .. no no no no no way u wrote it by ur self.. its good , but as i think u were lil bit to much with the " alone rhyme " .. but still good , keep it up

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:02 pm

THANKS

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:05 pm

u wellcome

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:18 pm

wow thats nice.

Number of posts : 132 Registration date : 2008-11-01

can i take it Very Happy

??? and make it mine????

Subject: Re: written by me.... Tue Nov 04, 2008 1:24 pm

sure,,make it a song u and ur band Very Happy

im serious though xD

Subject: Re: written by me.... Tue Nov 04, 2008 4:00 pm

hahaha its copied man... its not hers XD

Number of posts : 132 Registration date : 2008-11-01

i know its not for her

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:22 am

stfu
its mine
i wrote it,jay??
i thought u blved me!!!
wtf??? ITS NOT COPY
anyway i wrote it,me and my friend in the skool and if u dont blv it i dont care i should have expected this from the beginning Sad

((((((((

Number of posts : 1 Registration date : 2008-10-29

heeeeeeey
this is rly good song
i rly liked it
keep on writing songs lol
c u

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Nov 05, 2008 4:29 am

THANX FEFF U R THE ONLY 1 WHO RLY ROCKS Razz

Subject: Re: written by me.... Wed Nov 05, 2008 5:50 am

hehe nah i blv u , cmon dont b mad Smile

Number of posts : 132 Registration date : 2008-11-01

is it really written by u gurl???

Subject: Re: written by me.... Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:45 am

shows inside bitterness and how sick of waiting .. !
loved it.. thnx for sharing EmO

Subject: Re: written by me.... Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:16 am

woooow ... sounds nice to be for death metal song
really cool mam .... 10 of 10
and don't get bothered from what they r saying .... they r jealous ... hahahaha Cool

really nice work mam .. keep the shit up

Subject: Re: written by me.... Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:30 pm

well its mine now, i asked for i and she said i can take it Razz

Subject: Re: written by me.... Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:36 pm

loooooooooooooooooooool a-jay

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huh u ...........
i will make it my song !!!

Subject: Re: written by me.... Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:56 pm

dave u lost admit it !!!

Number of posts : 132 Registration date : 2008-11-01

no no no way scared

Subject: Re: written by me.... Sun Nov 16, 2008 11:19 am

HAHHAAHA u guys r rly funny!!lol
if its sooo cool then why should i give it you free??hahaha im gnna sell it xD

Subject: Re: written by me.... Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:58 pm

no way gurl u told me that u gave it to me soits done u cant change ur word :p

Subject: Re: written by me.... Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:15 am

no i changed my word bkefeeeee xD hahahhaaha

Subject: Re: written by me.... Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:43 am

mako bkefch ..
i made my mind !!! Very Happy